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April 3rd poems

Today’s prompt: Write a Haiku

In case you’re unsure what that is, here are some guidelines from the Poetic Asides blog:

1. It’s a 3-line poem.
2. While many think the lines should be 5-7-5 syllables, that’s actually not true. It’s 5-7-5 “sounds” if you’re writing in Japanese. For English purposes, it tends to be a shorter 1st and 3rd line–with a slightly longer 2nd line.

3. The haiku describes nature–with an emphasis on description. Haiku do not rhyme or use metaphors and/or similes.

4. Haiku includes a word to indicate season. For instance, the word “frog” might indicate spring; the word “snow” might indicate winter.

5. There’s also usually a juxtaposition of two sensory images. For instance, the most famous haiku involves a frog jumping into a pond as the first sensory image–the water’s sound as the second. When put together, the sensory images turn a very simple moment into a profound poem.
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On the keening wind
Cardinal and junco take wing
The cat stretches and yawns

–Candace

Fragile buds burst forth
robin perched nearby awaits
patient for south winds

–Amy

One Response to “April 3rd poems”

  1. 1
    Jerry Says:

    The snow is melting.
    A timid crocus peeks out.
    Behold! A new world.

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